this picture is the sex heh heh heh. that fic rox, and i haven't come by much fanart for it, so huzzah!! lol. yeah, i think the muscle proportion there is fine. you might wanna drop the line on the right shoulder though, and that would get rid of what you might see as wrong. otherwise, i think it's fun hee hee, war mage ash here is totally the seksi
Awsome picture!!.... I think that his shoulders a little too large though.....
ANyway, that's an awsome face, and I dunno, the whole feel to the picture is cool!!
*waves* keep drawing! (and writing...... History of Magic! ^_^)